I am not impressed by gravity
all entropy begins and ends
with the arcs of your finger-
nails—nine new galaxies
the chewed hangnail of
your thumb, they free
my feet from
lonely
Earth
Soar Feet
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I am not impressed by gravity
all entropy begins and ends
with the arcs of your finger-
nails—nine new galaxies
the chewed hangnail of
your thumb, they free
my feet from
lonely
Earth
Northwest Journals 
Those breaks between stanzas were really effective and your title too!
You are once again the master! I have to say I spent quite a long time thinking about the nine other fingers saving the one thumb. This is like a rorschack nonet. What do you see?
I don’t know if I was supposed to find this sexy, but, uh, I did. The half-finished thoughts, the interrupted phrases, the power those fingernails have…anyway, it was very well done. And I appreciate your experimentation with the nonet formatting – it’s neat to see how differently everyone is writing them.
I found this bittersweet undercurrent, about relationships–“begins and ends,” “free,” “lonely.” The framing of “I am not impressed” as well as “gravity” and “Earth.” Hmm, intriguing…
I like the way you created stanzas for this especially the hyphenated finger-nails. And the title. Well played, sir.