Get Well Soon

Everything hurt—chewing, coughing, breathing even—so between the nurses’ questions about pain levels and decreasing dosages, I occupied myself by staring at the television. The Streets of San Francisco was on. Steve Keller was chasing a bad guy across a parking lot. Rosalyn, my wife, must have gone down to make a call, and I was alone when Albert walked into my room.

“Look at you. That contraption you’re in makes you look like a robot. You ain’t auditioning to be the next ‘Six Million Dollar Man,’ are you?” He was talking about my back brace. He stopped a few feet short of my bed and waited for a reply. His bell-bottomed slacks cinched below the volleyball of his belly and pooled at his loafers. He looked ridiculous.

But instead of telling him so, I dryly said, “You should have called an ambulance” and moved my eyes back to the tv.

“You know why I didn’t.”

“They’re medics, not policemen. All they would have asked you to do is point to where I was.”

Albert had been in and out of jail since I was the size of a quarter: theft, public intoxication, child neglect. He didn’t like policemen, so after watching me fall off the roof, he got in his car and drove until he found someone else to deal with me. Yet another example of my father’s problems taking priority over my well being.

“I’d have had to file a report, wouldn’t I?”

“People don’t know about your record unless you tell them, you know. I can’t believe you just left me there. What if I’d died?”

“Stop being over-dramatic. You were breathing. You hadn’t broken anything. Rosalyn was only down the street, so I went and got her. I figured she’d want to ride with you.”

I had been re-roofing the house. Albert was there helping me as part of a reward system we’d worked out. He started calling me about five years ago to apologize and ask to be a part of my life. I eventually gave him the chance to prove it. He sobered up; I started acknowledging his presence. He managed to stay out of jail for a year; I invited him to dinner, and so on. It had taken him three years to work up to being my assistant carpenter.

“You should have forgotten yourself for a second and called a damn ambulance.”

“You only fell fifteen feet. And you got here, didn’t you? Besides, you’ve always been good at taking care of yourself.”

“No thanks to you, Dad.” I sneered. “I had to learn to take care of myself because my parents were too lit to feed me. You know, I was talking to Carol a few weeks ago and she told me this cute story from when I was young. Seems she found me on a kitchen counter one morning chowing down on some dry spaghetti noodles. When I asked her how old she thought I’d been, do you know what she said?”

Albert was so silent that, even through my anger and the pain medication,  I registered the tinkling of a commercial jingle playing on the television. I’d never brought up the bad years before; he didn’t know how to respond.

“She said I was five months old. Have you ever heard of a baby so young being able to climb onto a countertop? I must have been pretty motivated to get up there, huh? Bet I was hungry, and I bet I had to learn real quick that in order to stop the hunger I needed to climb counters and open cabinets. So, fuck you, Dad, for teaching me the hard way that I only have myself to rely on.”

I don’t know if it was the anger, the concussion, or the medication, but a wave of nausea overtook me. I grabbed the bed pan. When I finished, I saw the back of him turn out of my room. It was just like him to leave when someone was holding him accountable for something.

This story is very loosely based on family folklore.

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30 Replies to “Get Well Soon”

  1. This is so well written and even sadder knowing that it’s “loosely” based on your experience. I was lucky to have parents always there for me. As a mom, I can’t imagine being any other way. I’m sorry for you it wasn’t so easy.

    1. Thank you for the empathy, Stacie. But it really is loosely based on a family story and not a part of my story in the least. My parents were/are fantastic and have always been there for me. Since some of the people are still living I had to change the story enough to be its own thing.

  2. “Family folklore”? As I was reading it I thought it had a similar kind of atmosphere to the very short story you posted last week. Does that mean there might be a larger project to weave some of the stories together?

    Btw you realise that with lines such as “His bell-bottomed slacks cinched below the volleyball of his belly and pooled at his loafers. He looked ridiculous.” you might risk alienating some of your potential readers who are currently rocking that look? 😉

      1. For instance, Enid from my story about the woman who leaves her kids in the bus station (Erosion) is this narrator’s mother. But the kids in Erosion aren’t him – they are his step-siblings. And Olivia and Lena from my story Bayliss Park are Albert’s mother and sister.

  3. Usually I feel bad for a character, but here, the shattered family is what got me. I don’t know who this dad is based on, or the full context of this piece. However, everyone makes mistakes, sometimes horrible ones, but everyone also deserves a second chance. Furthermore, human nature tells us to act selfishly, in order to survive. It sometimes takes hold in extreme circumstances…
    Whatever the case, congrats on the great piece!

    1. In the real live story, the father and son reconnect with a few bumpy patches. the family is still broken, but these two had some time together! Thanks for your feedback, DS!

  4. I loved the raw emotion of this piece, but it’s made me so sad to think of a 5 month old being left to fend for itself ..and then right through to adulthood too when your character did eventually “fall off the counter.” I enjoyed being pulled into the hospital room and you held my attention throughout as it unfolded. Little details like referring to the dad as Albert make all the difference in building up the picture of this broken and complicated relationship. Excellent job!

    1. I got the idea of the 5 year old climbing from a true and recent story from outside of my family. That little boy is being raised by his grandparents now, so it has a happy ending. His favorite snack is still dry spaghetti noodles.

  5. His pain and hurt comes through their interaction so well. Amazing what we’ll put up with from family, isn’t it?

    Great story, Nate. I adore the imagery in this line: “His bell-bottomed slacks pooled at his loafers.” Nicely done!

    1. Sorry for the downer. I’ve recently realized that I write about people having depressing arguments a lot. I’m going to try to break out of that habit. Thanks for commenting!

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